tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post1029862432972536329..comments2023-10-21T05:56:15.949-06:00Comments on Utah Savage: The Great Depression (4th new chapter of The NaricssistUtah Savagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16385093247915560752noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post-14748566297846425802009-09-10T12:45:34.620-06:002009-09-10T12:45:34.620-06:00I've gotta second LBR. More internal angsty vi...I've gotta second LBR. More internal angsty vibing. But the exterior is some good goddamn stuff.Randal Graveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post-46654563920934861632009-09-09T12:50:36.144-06:002009-09-09T12:50:36.144-06:00Are you asking for feedback? I am totally engaged ...Are you asking for feedback? I am totally engaged and engrossed and want more. I do have to tell you that I wanted more internal narrative of the you character. I want to know how you feel as you ask these questions. I want to know how it is to hear your mother's words. More internal to go with the dialog. Feel free to ignore my wants.;-)<br /><br />Robinson's when it was still a nice store. Hmmm...that takes me back.La Belette Rougehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05686717070120116918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post-81374956763654294702009-09-08T20:55:44.673-06:002009-09-08T20:55:44.673-06:00As the father of two little girls, this scares the...As the father of two little girls, this scares the hell out of me.<br /><br />Well written, but very scary.<br /><br />DocDochttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16979621370660001312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post-34079326355161770182009-09-08T17:06:12.305-06:002009-09-08T17:06:12.305-06:00Fast, smooth read.
Authentic and genuine.
Strong v...Fast, smooth read.<br />Authentic and genuine.<br />Strong visual with the mauve dressing room keeps it grounded in reality.PENolanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17920921974302444898noreply@blogger.com