tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post4391307194266547799..comments2023-10-21T05:56:15.949-06:00Comments on Utah Savage: The Judith Blue Stories: #2. JuniorUtah Savagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16385093247915560752noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post-92142212378406720312010-03-01T12:07:46.814-07:002010-03-01T12:07:46.814-07:00MRMacrum, thanks for catching my spelling errors. ...MRMacrum, thanks for catching my spelling errors. I have trouble with the homophones. I never learned to spell. When I was in the grade they taught spelling they were experimenting with a new way of teaching spelling and it didn't work.Utah Savagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16385093247915560752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post-14363907312237648502010-03-01T08:37:10.498-07:002010-03-01T08:37:10.498-07:00I'm reading/watching character development... ...I'm reading/watching character development... <br />reading... reading.... :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16419040049480437384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post-67676344714553470432010-03-01T05:48:45.047-07:002010-03-01T05:48:45.047-07:00A bit of a let down quantity wise after the awesom...A bit of a let down quantity wise after the awesome first installment. But I understand as I often start something and walk away because of whatever.......<br /><br />One grammatical you might want to take care of - <br /><i>"Her hand is <b>messaging</b> the tight knot of muscles between her eyebrows.</i><br /><br />I had an immediate image of unnatural communication - Was this a mistake? Or is it the beginnings of the fantasy world she is driving herself into? Although messaging knots would be a nice power to have. Maybe one to work on sinuses even. ;)<br /><br />I had a feeling Junior would follow her. How, was the question. You kept it simple and tight.<br /><br />Looking forward to more.MRMacrumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01414173517957120477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post-34273336813408797822010-02-25T14:43:26.768-07:002010-02-25T14:43:26.768-07:00"Suuure I'll give you a ride"...To t..."<i>Suuure</i> I'll give you a ride"...To the all-night no-questions-asked organ donating bank, conveniently right next door to the Yum-Meow cat food rendering plant.<br /><br />Gosh, did I use my interior monologue voice again? Oh, bother.<br /><br />;>)darkblackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06584075324283109495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post-560122688537288182010-02-22T19:20:34.951-07:002010-02-22T19:20:34.951-07:00LBR, I'm so glad your back. I write fast, it&...LBR, I'm so glad your back. I write fast, it's the editing that slows me down. I'm thinking....<br /><br />Gwendolyn, I love the Sweetgrass! Thanks again for that. And I'm sorry to hear about the freeloading young man, but it seems to be a pretty universal archetype so... I'm thinking...Utah Savagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16385093247915560752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post-21524760519489680052010-02-22T15:53:35.702-07:002010-02-22T15:53:35.702-07:00my thought is, this is the intro or an ongoing adv...my thought is, this is the intro or an ongoing adventure...? but it gives me a psychic pause since I am dealing with a freeloading young man who has not paid his rent and I'm in the midst of saying...<br />get the fuck out! <br />so, please continue quickly so I might find my conclusive psychic nutshell? LOL<br />Hope the backs' better Utah! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16419040049480437384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954604416278665691.post-41722180340529576232010-02-22T15:34:31.243-07:002010-02-22T15:34:31.243-07:00Tease!!!!!!!!:-)
xxooTease!!!!!!!!:-)<br />xxooLa Belette Rougehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05686717070120116918noreply@blogger.com